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HELP@$%#^
« on: October 23, 2010, 04:54:53 PM »
I am really bad at writing... I need some help with a meta description for the new Flash Cartoons Portal

this is what i came up with, and i think it sucks!!!

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Do you like to make flash cartoons? We now have a portal for users to upload, rate and comment on flash submissions! Check it out!

Anyone have a better idea?

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Re: HELP@$%#^
« Reply #1 on: October 23, 2010, 06:50:35 PM »
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Here is something short, descriptive, gives an incentive, and ensures security, you better like it

Interested in having your animations or games hosted and featured on flashcartoons.org to get more exposure?

Please Upload Here: http://portal.flashcartoons.org/

Vote, Blog, and Post your Games and Animations in our hosting section.

If you have any questions don't hesitate to e-mail us.
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« Reply #2 on: October 23, 2010, 07:00:49 PM »
that sounds more like an Advertisement, (A GOOD ONE  [yum]) a description shouldn't have a domain in it.

Some examples of meta descriptions:

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Serving anime fans' information needs with daily news, columns, reviews and the most extensive anime & manga database on the internet.

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Provides a range of products for digital media creation and editing, multimedia authoring, and web development. Includes documentation and support for all.

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Welcome to Yahoo!, the world's most visited home page. Quickly find what you're searching for, get in touch with friends and stay in-the-know with the worlds leading search engine.


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Re: HELP@$%#^
« Reply #3 on: October 23, 2010, 07:28:32 PM »
How bout...

Play Games, Watch Animations, and Vote in our Flash Portal, Upload your Movies and Games and Blog about your latest news.

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Re: HELP@$%#^
« Reply #4 on: October 24, 2010, 07:18:52 AM »
Calling all animators! Looking to upload your toons to the web? Flashcartoons now has a portal for your benefit! Show off your work!
I am the creator of awesome points and therefore I have a never ending supply.
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Re: HELP@$%#^
« Reply #5 on: October 24, 2010, 07:20:05 AM »
Any artist needs exposure, WE'RE HERE FOR YOU!
Upload your animations/flash games and see people vote, comment, and favorite your submissions!

Start with the simple upload page found HERE and away you go! Fame is just beyond the horizon!

Your opinion matters! Vote and comment on others' submissions because you know whats best!

Still not satisfied? Join the forums and rally members to your cause!

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Re: HELP@$%#^
« Reply #6 on: October 24, 2010, 07:35:53 AM »
I put all yours together.

"Calling all animators and game developers, do you need more exposure? Upload your cartoon animations, flash games and see people vote, comment, and favorite your submissions. Fame is just beyond the horizon!"

Thoughts? I still feel something is wrong..

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Re: HELP@$%#^
« Reply #7 on: October 24, 2010, 08:53:50 AM »
The only problem is that some feel like flyers for Acme or something. These things are always hard to come up with. Best thing to do is check out other meta descriptions and see what pulls you in, then utilize that in your own format.

Want big exposure for your flash? Got a game with huge potential? Upload 'em on Flashcartoons, we've got more bandwidth than your uncle's boxershorts!
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Re: HELP@$%#^
« Reply #8 on: October 24, 2010, 02:55:40 PM »
he is really sensitive about bandwidth, but it was a real funny :)

fame is just around the corner sounds lame, replace that with something a little better

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Re: HELP@$%#^
« Reply #9 on: October 25, 2010, 05:24:56 AM »
HEY I SAID THAT AND I TINK ITS CLASSY

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Re: HELP@$%#^
« Reply #10 on: October 25, 2010, 06:40:05 AM »
:3 it paints a pretty picture in my head... sorta like this:
I am the creator of awesome points and therefore I have a never ending supply.
10 Luffle Points~!


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********(¨`·.·´¨).I.(¨`·.·´¨)* *********
****(`·.·´`·. ¸.·;Love`·.¸.·´`·.·´)*****
*****`·.¸.·´*ZombieHugs*`·¸.´******
*******`·.¸(¨`· Forever·´¨)..·´********
**************`·.¸.·´********* ******
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Re: HELP@$%#^
« Reply #11 on: October 25, 2010, 07:38:32 AM »
it is witty and funny!

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Re: HELP@$%#^
« Reply #12 on: October 25, 2010, 09:30:20 AM »
:3 so we all leik eet cept Bloo
I am the creator of awesome points and therefore I have a never ending supply.
10 Luffle Points~!


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********(¨`·.·´¨).I.(¨`·.·´¨)* *********
****(`·.·´`·. ¸.·;Love`·.¸.·´`·.·´)*****
*****`·.¸.·´*ZombieHugs*`·¸.´******
*******`·.¸(¨`· Forever·´¨)..·´********
**************`·.¸.·´********* ******
[refle]http://4mchan.org/Forum/gallery/1_22_05_09_12_36_39.png[/refle]

[img]http://4mchan.org/Forum/gallery/1_27_08_09_1_54_05.

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Re: HELP@$%#^
« Reply #13 on: October 25, 2010, 09:01:10 PM »
After looking at that picture I think Fame is just over the horizon, sounds much cleaner.

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Re: HELP@$%#^
« Reply #14 on: October 25, 2010, 10:22:45 PM »
Thanks, folks! Ads should always be short and to-the-point, unlike infomercials where they think it takes two hours to convince you that you need to cut your boots in half with a ginsu knife.
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*******`·.¸(¨`Forever·´¨)..·´*******
**************`·.¸.·´************

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Re: HELP@$%#^
« Reply #15 on: October 26, 2010, 12:51:24 AM »
It really should just be a few words like 8 at most... I don't like reading long sentences.  I mean think of ur favorite places or websites. Whats there thing say?

Newgrounds... everything, by everyone
Subway... Eat Fresh
Burger King.. Have it your way
Pokemon... Gotta Catch them All
Target... Expect More Pay Less
Walmart.. Low Price Everyday

Even if I don't want to read, I see these lines and without even trying.

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Re: HELP@$%#^
« Reply #16 on: October 26, 2010, 07:29:06 AM »
Flash Cartoons Portal - It Ain't Squirrels

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Re: HELP@$%#^
« Reply #17 on: October 26, 2010, 07:41:17 AM »
Flash Cartoons Portal- It IS Squirrels C:
I am the creator of awesome points and therefore I have a never ending supply.
10 Luffle Points~!


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********(¨`·.·´¨).I.(¨`·.·´¨)* *********
****(`·.·´`·. ¸.·;Love`·.¸.·´`·.·´)*****
*****`·.¸.·´*ZombieHugs*`·¸.´******
*******`·.¸(¨`· Forever·´¨)..·´********
**************`·.¸.·´********* ******
[refle]http://4mchan.org/Forum/gallery/1_22_05_09_12_36_39.png[/refle]

[img]http://4mchan.org/Forum/gallery/1_27_08_09_1_54_05.

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Re: HELP@$%#^
« Reply #18 on: October 26, 2010, 07:54:33 AM »
I like Addys suggestion :)

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Re: HELP@$%#^
« Reply #19 on: October 26, 2010, 08:07:44 AM »
:D thanks~!
I am the creator of awesome points and therefore I have a never ending supply.
10 Luffle Points~!


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********(¨`·.·´¨).I.(¨`·.·´¨)* *********
****(`·.·´`·. ¸.·;Love`·.¸.·´`·.·´)*****
*****`·.¸.·´*ZombieHugs*`·¸.´******
*******`·.¸(¨`· Forever·´¨)..·´********
**************`·.¸.·´********* ******
[refle]http://4mchan.org/Forum/gallery/1_22_05_09_12_36_39.png[/refle]

[img]http://4mchan.org/Forum/gallery/1_27_08_09_1_54_05.