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Title: Poem: Breaking the Shackles
Post by: Omega on August 28, 2009, 07:07:32 PM

http://skyeomega.deviantart.com/art/Breaking-the-Shackles-135090237

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Title: Re: Poem: Breaking the Shackles
Post by: Adelaide on August 28, 2009, 07:11:33 PM

I LIKE EET!!! ISH AMAZING POETRY =3

You ish gewd at teh poeting of poetry ^^

Keep up the gewd work Omega, the rhyme scheme is awesome and it had gewd flow!

Title: Re: Poem: Breaking the Shackles
Post by: Omega on August 28, 2009, 07:47:04 PM

Awww, thanks! It was my first attempt too! ^//^

Title: Re: Poem: Breaking the Shackles
Post by: Adelaide on August 28, 2009, 07:59:23 PM

It's really very gewd for a first try, in that case! =D
Keep it up, with a little more practice you'll be great ^^

Title: Re: Poem: Breaking the Shackles
Post by: Flashwerewolf on August 28, 2009, 09:04:45 PM

Nice poem, its clean clear and flows well

Title: Re: Poem: Breaking the Shackles
Post by: Omega on August 28, 2009, 10:12:51 PM

Thank you both, I will. :>