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Poem: Breaking the Shackles

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Poem: Breaking the Shackles
« on: August 28, 2009, 07:07:32 PM »
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Re: Poem: Breaking the Shackles
« Reply #1 on: August 28, 2009, 07:11:33 PM »
I LIKE EET!!! ISH AMAZING POETRY =3

You ish gewd at teh poeting of poetry ^^

Keep up the gewd work Omega, the rhyme scheme is awesome and it had gewd flow!
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Re: Poem: Breaking the Shackles
« Reply #2 on: August 28, 2009, 07:47:04 PM »
Awww, thanks! It was my first attempt too! ^//^
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Re: Poem: Breaking the Shackles
« Reply #3 on: August 28, 2009, 07:59:23 PM »
It's really very gewd for a first try, in that case! =D
Keep it up, with a little more practice you'll be great ^^
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Re: Poem: Breaking the Shackles
« Reply #4 on: August 28, 2009, 09:04:45 PM »
Nice poem, its clean clear and flows well
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Re: Poem: Breaking the Shackles
« Reply #5 on: August 28, 2009, 10:12:51 PM »
Thank you both, I will. :>
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