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Addy's Poems
« on: November 03, 2009, 10:35:49 PM »
o.o Omega has been posting a lot of poetry so here's some of mine I guess..

Uhm.. this one was a request from a friend of mine who liked wolves o.o This has an ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH IJIJ sorta rhyme scheme.. (for those who dont use letters to explain rhyme scheme "ABAB" is a single stanza, every line labeled "A" rhymes with every other line labeled "A")

Wolves' Pursuit

Glimmering moon
Full in the sky
Silver cast strewn
In rippled water of wry

Through forest trees
Runs a frantic deer
Icy cold breeze
Eyes widened in fear

Stalking close behind
The pack nears its prey
A deer's racing mind
They wish to slay

Bloodied claws tear
Pure white fangs snap
Long ruffled grey hair
Leave the deer a mere scrap

A ominous low howl
Sounds through the woods
Entwined in coos from an owl
Beauty is misunderstood

Basic theme: Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.

Uh... this one works more around the use of symbolism... I was fond of it..

Roses are Red

As gorgeous as it seems to be
It trusts no one but itself
It stands alone, a single rose
Surrounded by its defensive thorns

It withers ever so slow
Its prominent petals of red
Drop around its roots
I can see it die

The dreadful life it had
Is nearing to an end
And it seems that its fates been sealed
to always be alone even when its dead

Out of souls and out of minds
It suffers alone
From its fear to trust
Live alone then die alone it must

If it hadn't known the world
For what it truly was
It might just have been naive enough
To trust who's minds think of greed and lust

But it knew the truth
That it would have soon been killed
A death it shouldn't have to face
But now must face alone

Will it be remembered,
Once it is no more?
Or will it be forgotten because
It never learned to trust?

I originally posted that one of Red's forum while it was still pretty alive, so you can tell it's old..

Hey Diddle Diddle

Here I am with my riddle
A rhyme about a cat and his fiddle
over the moon, hey diddle diddle
Between night and day the cow's stuck in the middle
There a dog sits in joyful bliss
Such a sight did not go amiss
And laugh as he does at a sight such as this
The laughter is swallowed into the abyss
Here is where away a dish goes
Why he does, only the spoon knows
gone into the night, wind blows
Strong they did seem, it was only a pose

o.o That one probably could have been continued but it died due to writer's block.. uhmm.. yeah... i didnt like it.. i feel the rhyme scheme was all over the place...

This next one was a result of an anxiety disorder I have.. uhmm... i had a lapse when i wrote it so.. o.o its just a venting of anxiety...

Stress

Here I am with pent up stress
Heart beats fast, cardiac arrest
Anxiety rules and I can't protest
My endless thoughts never give it a rest

So much anxiety, so much tension
I feel like I'm lost in another's dimension
Finding it hard to pay any attention
I feel as if I owe them all some bit of pension

I won't ever voice my own inner pains
My fears have me tangled up in their chains
Sorrow is now surging through all of my veins
From my eyes down my face sorrow rains

Your problems will always come before my own
My own mental law that is written in stone
And when the days over and I am alone
Now you can smile, but to stress I'm still prone

I want to help the world see the light
And I wish for hope to be within their sight
So that to them the future is bright
Though I'll be left behind in the darkness of night

So here I am, a slave to pure intentions
And stress, it shall be my own abstention
Because your problems will always be my interventions
And more forceful will be my  tensions

The pain will build and I will deny
that I too have problems, though its only a lie
And soon I shall be put into my own natural high
And waving to you goodbye as I die...

It was mostly about how i kept trying to help everyone else before i took myself into account and how the stress eventually built up.. luckily my GAD (Generalized Anxiety Disorder) hasn't been a problem for a few years now.. I haven't had a lapse in a long long time.. i think I finally got past it =D YAY

This I think is my most recent poem I think...

Untitled

Sing to me a gentle song
The voice of angels sings along

A gentle sound beckons to me
I follow it now, what can it be?

It guides me away and I follow it still
Into the darkness so I'll get my fill

The lighting is gone and I'm in pitch black
The angels call; I cannot turn back

I can't keep from stepping further away
I can't seem to remember why I wanted to stay

I glanced over my shoulder
My heart just grows colder

As I gaze upon your face
Why is it you I wish to embrace?

Of all thing things that I do want
Your presence here, my heart it taunts

But the voice is still calling
And I am still falling

So please catch me in you arms
And hold me there for just a while
And comfort with your loving smile
And for just a moment I'll be whole

Even so.. it too is old o.o
I should probably get working on a few new ones but I've been distracted.. blah...

Just a few old works I guess.. o.o

Well.. bai!
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Re: Addy's Poems
« Reply #1 on: November 03, 2009, 10:43:16 PM »
Nice! They are pretty good!

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Re: Addy's Poems
« Reply #2 on: November 03, 2009, 11:18:58 PM »
THANKS!
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Re: Addy's Poems
« Reply #3 on: November 04, 2009, 02:45:43 PM »
I likes! Good stuff!  [neko02] I'm really feeling the first one, 'wolve's pursuit'!

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« Reply #4 on: November 04, 2009, 03:25:45 PM »
*rages from the awesome-ness of these poems* I LOVE THESE!  [sword]
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Re: Addy's Poems
« Reply #5 on: November 05, 2009, 12:14:44 AM »
I likes! Good stuff!  [neko02] I'm really feeling the first one, 'wolve's pursuit'!

(Yay, first post in forevers!)

haha yeah, i like the imagery i used =3 Thanks for the comment, and welcome back to 4M~!

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Whooo! Thanks ^_^ Your poems are good too, =]
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Re: Addy's Poems
« Reply #6 on: November 07, 2009, 02:53:31 AM »
in rippled water of WRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

My brain pattern set does not make a reply is still more work to be mean?Are you saying we define ourselves through our interactions and expectations of individuals and think this board and it is harmless, cheesy fun in the second girl who has done that has any comments on like knights of the prisoner in which you have, or are at the same in spirit. But i'm staying here for semantics.

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« Reply #7 on: November 08, 2009, 11:55:50 AM »
The steamroller would cause more then a ripple.
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« Reply #8 on: November 08, 2009, 07:33:29 PM »
Wait, what?

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« Reply #9 on: November 08, 2009, 07:43:47 PM »
Yes.
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« Reply #10 on: November 08, 2009, 07:58:46 PM »
Oh I see.

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Re: Addy's Poems
« Reply #11 on: November 09, 2009, 09:38:34 AM »
OMG I AM DOUBLE POSTING BECAUSE I JUST LEARNED WHAT YOU GUYS WERE TALKING ABOUT!


"WRYYYY" is from a Japanese Flash animation where a stick figure on a steamroller falls on someone and screams the word/sound.

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Re: Addy's Poems
« Reply #12 on: November 09, 2009, 10:11:00 AM »
yus, I also believe it originated from some fighting game
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« Reply #13 on: November 09, 2009, 10:27:47 AM »
yep, i watched the flash... then i felt i wasted my time watching it
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Re: Addy's Poems
« Reply #14 on: November 09, 2009, 01:14:23 PM »
But its so so cool to us boys! [yoshi]

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« Reply #15 on: November 09, 2009, 01:40:07 PM »
=P if you say so
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Re: Addy's Poems
« Reply #16 on: November 10, 2009, 06:03:06 PM »
Dio Brando from Jo Jo's Bizzare Adventure.
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