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Title: What Happened
Post by: Omega on December 17, 2009, 11:00:48 PM

What Happened (http://skyeomega.deviantart.com/art/What-Happened-146544828)
Philosophical

What happened to the undying empathy everyone once had?
Instead we spit on the weak, express apathy and we're constantly mad.

We worship cars, clothes and wealth, which builds our vanity.
On the flip side the non-robotic units' struggle with their sanity.

People never want to hear the painful truth.
Too busy poisoning Mother Gaia or going on a wild-goose chase for the fountain of youth.

The B.S. masks people wear just to be accepted.
Automatons that dance to the beat that is expected.

It becomes painfully obvious that this will never change.
Everyday it will continue to become worse and worse during the daily exchange.

Title: Re: What Happened
Post by: Adelaide on December 18, 2009, 01:57:58 PM

=D Good poem is good! ^.^

I like this one.. I like them all actually.. you put things out there, in plain speech, that people refuse to look upon as a problem

Good work!

Title: Re: What Happened
Post by: Omega on December 19, 2009, 01:25:13 AM

Thanks!  [yum]

Title: Re: What Happened
Post by: Adelaide on December 19, 2009, 03:02:19 AM

=D you're welcome even though i just posted a post quite similar to this one in another one of your poem topics =D