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Title: Solitude
Post by: Omega on December 10, 2009, 08:31:31 PM
Solitude (http://skyeomega.deviantart.com/art/Solitude-146368175)
Philosophical

Blades collide, sparks fly.
One, two, and then three die.

Eyes glow burning red.
Abandon the sword, use Satan's magic instead.

Create a clone to double the fun.
They'll fight until they see the sun.

He exhales a longing sigh on his way into town.
With a sadden frown.

His mind is sequestered, but he doesn't think.
He'll just sit in this pub and drink.
Title: Re: Solitude
Post by: Adelaide on December 18, 2009, 02:00:38 PM
I dont really understand where this poem was going, from the settings of a battle, to a guy drinking in a pub... o.o could you elaborate for me?
Title: Re: Solitude
Post by: Omega on December 19, 2009, 01:25:50 AM
Basically because of the lifestyle he leads (which is very dangerous) he has to refrain from contact with people. Which leads to loneliness (aka solitude).  [yoshi]
Title: Re: Solitude
Post by: Adelaide on December 19, 2009, 03:01:46 AM
Ooooh! I get it! =D now it all makes sense! =D

 [xmas3]
Title: Re: Solitude
Post by: Omega on December 19, 2009, 01:26:55 PM
YAY!
Title: Re: Solitude
Post by: Adelaide on December 20, 2009, 10:15:30 PM
=3 it was a good poem all in all =D
Nice work Omega ^.^
And thanks for the explanation! =3
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