I'm not saying I don't like it, i'm saying its very wordy. o.o
I didn't read it all, so i wouldn't know if i like it.
-.- now I feel bad... *reads it*
okay.. o.o i recommend using punctuation to some degree... but other than that, you made a clear, pessimistic, scenario. o.o It's depressing though. =[
Also. Addy is sorry.