Discussion Zone: => Show Your Stuff! => Topic started by: willow on January 03, 2010, 05:31:47 PM
Title: help please~! >.< ((facial proportions))
Post by: willow on January 03, 2010, 05:31:47 PM
sorry... i'm not even sure if i'm using this ((theres a 60% chance i'm scraping it...=_=)) ... i'm just getting basic sketchwork down... >> anyways does the basic facial structure of this look somewhat proportional...? like all i semi drew in was his eye... the rest is scribble so like... this isn't on art quality i just need to know placement... >> i think he might need more of a chin... yea... blah... i'm no good with proportion >.<... comment critique please~ thankyu~!!!
Title: Re: help please~! >.< ((facial proportions))
Post by: Adelaide on January 03, 2010, 07:31:12 PM
his mouth seems too low. extend and square out the jaw and your should be fine; its really good DON'T SCRAP IT!!!
Title: Re: help please~! >.< ((facial proportions))
Post by: kinjo on January 03, 2010, 07:40:51 PM
its a good drawing, i would like to see detail everywhere same as around the eye
Title: Re: help please~! >.< ((facial proportions))
Post by: Flashwerewolf on January 03, 2010, 08:04:52 PM
well its not a human, so the proportions should be different than that of a human face. Thats how I see it. However if you're going for a human face, then the bridge of the nose is too pronounced. I also think the eye is at a different angle than the face, like it is curved into the nose too much.
Title: Re: help please~! >.< ((facial proportions))
Post by: Adelaide on January 03, 2010, 08:06:54 PM
I thought the eye was perfect, as for the nose, IF it is more humanoid, then yeah, he is right. If you are traveling away from normalcy then the pronounced look brings emphasis to the face.
Title: Re: help please~! >.< ((facial proportions))
Post by: willow on January 03, 2010, 11:15:05 PM
jaja~ fw is totally right on the eye... it's from a totally different concept where the head was on a weird angle >> yea... i totally suck at noses currently the only ref i had was a picture of an old lady too.... i never really looked at the whole bridge thing before though... i will remember that next time....i tried to fix the mouth thing... though it still looks odd right now... hopefully colour will help~ Thankyu~! ^w^ here's how the line art ended up: (http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g6/Shaman-hugger/zzzzzz.jpg)
Title: Re: help please~! >.< ((facial proportions))
Post by: Flashwerewolf on January 04, 2010, 01:38:46 AM
mouth looks good now, tho you never admitted wether or not it is based from a human or something elxe
Title: Re: help please~! >.< ((facial proportions))
Post by: willow on January 04, 2010, 01:43:33 AM
oh yea... he's like half human half lizard... sorry >>
Title: Re: help please~! >.< ((facial proportions))
Post by: Adelaide on January 04, 2010, 03:31:47 AM
haha~! zomg! Willow it looks AMAZINGZINGZING! Mouth is MUCH better! I can't wait to see if when it's all done!!!! =D!! [heart]
Title: Re: help please~! >.< ((facial proportions))
Post by: Red on January 05, 2010, 11:41:25 PM
MSUM has majors for arts you know, Willow-channnnnn. =P
Title: Re: help please~! >.< ((facial proportions))
Post by: Adelaide on January 06, 2010, 12:00:54 AM
She was already accepted into a state college where she lives =P
Title: Re: help please~! >.< ((facial proportions))
Post by: Red on January 06, 2010, 05:46:57 PM
She will switch in order to go to college with Red-kun.
Title: Re: help please~! >.< ((facial proportions))
Post by: willow on January 06, 2010, 06:16:18 PM
haha... i got accepted there too addy...lol i know they got art... though the thing they sent me in the mail made the art department look sorta lame >_>... it was a white paper with white words... like wow... thats artistic....
Title: Re: help please~! >.< ((facial proportions))
Post by: Red on January 06, 2010, 08:25:03 PM
Mail isn't usually colorful. >.>
Title: Re: help please~! >.< ((facial proportions))
Post by: Flashwerewolf on January 06, 2010, 09:56:13 PM
You can still make a paper airplane with it!
Title: Re: help please~! >.< ((facial proportions))
Post by: willow on January 06, 2010, 10:09:10 PM
they had pictures, textures, colours, and fake burn marks on the rest of it... [neko06]
Title: Re: help please~! >.< ((facial proportions))
Post by: Adelaide on January 06, 2010, 11:49:00 PM
" pictures, textures, colours, and fake burn marks"