help please~! >.< ((facial proportions))

[willow]

sorry... i'm not even sure if i'm using this ((theres a 60% chance i'm scraping it...=_=)) ... i'm just getting basic sketchwork down... >> anyways does the basic facial structure of this look somewhat proportional...? like all i semi drew in was his eye... the rest is scribble so like... this isn't on art quality i just need to know placement... >> i think he might need more of a chin... yea... blah... i'm no good with proportion >.<... comment critique please~ thankyu~!!!

[Adelaide]

his mouth seems too low. extend and square out the jaw and your should be fine; its really good DON'T SCRAP IT!!!

[kinjo]

its a good drawing, i would like to see detail everywhere same as around the eye

[Flashwerewolf]

well its not a human, so the proportions should be different than that of a human face. Thats how I see it. However if you're going for a human face, then the bridge of the nose is too pronounced. I also think the eye is at a different angle than the face, like it is curved into the nose too much.

[Adelaide]

I thought the eye was perfect, as for the nose, IF it is more humanoid, then yeah, he is right. If you are traveling away from normalcy then the pronounced look brings emphasis to the face.

[willow]

jaja~ fw is totally right on the eye... it's from a totally different concept where the head was on a weird angle >>
yea... i totally suck at noses currently the only ref i had was a picture of an old lady too.... i never really looked at the whole bridge thing before though... i will remember that next time....i tried to fix the mouth thing... though it still looks odd right now... hopefully colour will help~  Thankyu~! ^w^
 here's how the line art ended up:

[Flashwerewolf]

mouth looks good now, tho you never admitted wether or not it is based from a human or something elxe

[willow]

oh yea... he's like half human half lizard... sorry >>

[Adelaide]

haha~! zomg! Willow it looks AMAZINGZINGZING!
Mouth is MUCH better! I can't wait to see if when it's all done!!!!
=D!!
 

[Red]

MSUM has majors for arts you know, Willow-channnnnn. =P

[Adelaide]

She was already accepted into a state college where she lives =P

[Red]

She will switch in order to go to college with Red-kun.

[willow]

haha... i got accepted there too addy...lol i know they got art... though the thing they sent me in the mail made the art department look sorta lame >_>... it was a white paper with white words... like wow... thats artistic....

[Red]

Mail isn't usually colorful. >.>

[Flashwerewolf]

You can still make a paper airplane with it!

[willow]

they had pictures, textures, colours, and fake burn marks on the rest of it... 

[Adelaide]

" pictures, textures, colours, and fake burn marks"

Much cooler than white papeh