Man, I just don't know what to say to that. From a basic human/social perspective it really lacks personality. Outside of the weird grammar issues and formatting of your bio, you've made one huge critical mistake: Girls like older men! Just ask some of the circa high-school age kids here—I bet they know quite a few hot chicks who are dating guys way older than them.
Also, emphasizing being normal is usually a red flag that you aren't, but in a bad way. Seriously, F being normal. Normal is boring, normal is the mild sauce of life, normal is a slice of white Wonderbread with a side of warm tap water. It's about as exciting as going to a Celine Dion concert, then topping the night off with a riveting game of charades with the in-laws and a glass of table wine.
The most you have to say about yourself are the things you own, other peoples' works and how much you like "playing." This is where you have to obey the "show not tell" rule in writing. A bio is a chance to showcase your personality! If it doesn't go beyond watching anime or playing Xbox then you have to discover who you really are and what's stopping that guy from coming out.
It's ok to like geek things; I am a geek. I'm wearing a shirt that says "Dragons [the other white meat]." Geek is the new trendy thing to be. In fact, it has never been easier for us to be popular. Anyone can watch CBS's The Big Bang Theory and figure that out.
I'm not in favor for teaching guys how to manipulate their way into the sack. I used to be like that, and it's just a path of shallow meaningless guilt free sex with beautiful women (ok, ignore that last part), maybe listen to Katy Perry's song "Firework." I don't really know, but I do know that if you aren't happy in life you need to make dramatic changes.